 shutyatrap
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Date: October 23, 2007 @ 5:46 AM
You’re going to die soon
I will not tell a lie (x2)
Your gonna die soon
Must I tell you why (x2)
Please can you die soon?
Fucking hurry up and die
You been so down/I’m out of shape/painful mornings/fateful days
Leaving town/cant find my way/Happiness has gone astray
So you are…
Your gonna die soon, I wont tell you why, your gonna die, Mommy let him die Mommy let him die..mommy
Shortness of breath and then you’ll fall
In a quick flash you’ll end it all.
Blame your death of your mother/blame your death on your father/blame your death on you brother/blame your death on your sister…. Oh fuck you can guess the rest of these predictable lyrics..lol
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HenriRoger
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Date: October 23, 2007 @ 6:22 AM
Cool family ...
I mean cool track ...
Well it's good to be alive ...
Bravo to both of you 
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AgentMGD
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Date: October 23, 2007 @ 8:14 AM
 *shivers*
oh the creepy things Blue can create ...like the vox
cool collab 
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hantu
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Date: October 23, 2007 @ 8:56 AM
Bitchin!
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kingo
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Date: October 23, 2007 @ 9:05 AM
Very nice work guys. I'm locking my door.
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 Ghostie
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Date: October 23, 2007 @ 10:11 AM
Not quite a happy song is it? 
but is sounds Good ..Damn GOOD! 
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BOWILLIE
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Date: October 23, 2007 @ 5:43 PM
is a very fine collab!!
nice work
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 GTOriginal
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Date: October 23, 2007 @ 5:59 PM
   tick tock...
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Israfel
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Date: October 23, 2007 @ 8:04 PM
Couple of creepy ass mofo's aren't you? Welcome to the dark side. About time you guys showed up. Right this way, leave your souls at the door.  Nice work!
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evansorchid
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Date: October 23, 2007 @ 8:55 PM
WOW!!!! That was a breath of death air...or something like that.
Makes me wanna crawl into my closet with my ipod and ear buds and listen to the Smashing Pumpkins album Gish at maximum volume until my ears bleed.
With a little tweeking, I'll bet we could get this sounding phenominal. It needs some sonic midrange guitar counterpoint squeals to coagulate the bleeding in my head.
Excellent track. Quite unexpected!
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TOA2007
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Date: October 24, 2007 @ 11:22 AM
lol I luv it! KILLER GREAT TRACK.
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 NoRentJoseph
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Date: October 24, 2007 @ 12:59 PM
Great fookin Bassline.
Love the effect on the Vocal Steve. 
Awesome lyrics 
Overall awesomeness on this collab
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Rodrica
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Date: October 24, 2007 @ 3:08 PM
Great stuff!  It's great to hear you guys doing a heavy rock song - this really shows your versatility! This rocks!!
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 guitaroo
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Date: October 24, 2007 @ 5:20 PM
Wow...very professional... Love the drums and the vocals are sweet.... Great job both of you guys  
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Bluenevus
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Date: October 24, 2007 @ 7:07 PM
ahh man 
I have to say this is by far, the fastest turn around on a collab ever.
Kick ass 
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farfor44
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Date: October 24, 2007 @ 7:16 PM
 Damn it I love this guys!! This is totally new for both of ya
Kickin ass and taking names
Crazy bout the vocals excellent fx.
Drums are killer Slick bass work,
fantastic guitar work
awsome collab U two
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leedsquietman
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Date: October 24, 2007 @ 8:15 PM
Awesome. Sounds like Midnight Oil on heavy steroids doing glam rock. The vocal effect is seriously creepy lofi and I love it !! This is the kind of song that  Chris Benoit could have been listening to before offing his family ....it's that powerful !! (watch the lawsuits boys). Sounds like nothing I would have expected from 2 of DM's heavyweight hitters, great concept and music.
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realmedia
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Date: October 25, 2007 @ 1:00 AM
holy shit this song is pretty cool
lol~ i cant beleave how rocking this is~
damn wel i have to say shutyatrap is is some really original vox~ great vocal presence and melodie and blu~ i am not sure what ta think of you, you just fuckin amaze me period!!! compositionally this is a cool song beat bass guitar everything working great~production great,, and i think i will download this now ~
  
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KitRumble
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Date: October 25, 2007 @ 7:05 AM
Damn guys..this is right down my track. Steve's vocals sound awesome and the bass/percussion is jammin. What a freaky unusual scary track. Great performance from both of you and so unexpected in style. creepy good ( love the choppy guitar style )
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ebarbarella
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Date: October 25, 2007 @ 2:09 PM
wow you guys, this is a great collab! love it playlisted for Goth Nights Radio
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moam
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Date: October 26, 2007 @ 1:08 AM
My favorite part about this track is the drum track...especially when the beat picks up. Your vox also sound pretty bad ass, especially with those effects. Normally I would say that the vox effects are almost too much, but not in this case. It mostly fits. I really like this track, especially up to about 1:30. I have no idea what you are saying there, and it sounds a little bit off beat, so its pretty hard to follow. I really love your vocal line though, "You're gonna die soon..." Not only just the wickedness of the words, but the melody of it too. It seems to fit quite well. I also like how you ended it. "blame your death on your mother..." etc.. This is totally my type of track. I hope you make more tracks kind of like this because I love this dark-ass style. My only criticism besides the part at 1:30 is it sounds like some of your vocals are a tad off beat, but not to a horribly noticeable point. Overall, nice work Steven!
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Mojosnake
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Date: October 26, 2007 @ 1:56 AM
this is AWESOME!!!!!!!!!!!
very much like a band named christian death
steve your lyrics and vocals are freakin amazing on this 
and frank the multi instramentalist..
this is really great backing...
AWESOME AWESOME TRACK FELLA'S
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baiko
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Date: October 26, 2007 @ 5:50 PM
ha ha ha!! great tune!!!!this is very dark and enjoyable!! i always loved slipknot and stuff, and this is that kind of stuff...
really wicked!!
bravo!!!
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aorpete
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Date: October 27, 2007 @ 3:06 PM
I like this!!!
Really reminds me of BLACK SABBETH...
Nice hard guitars an wild lyrics all add-up to a mighty enjoyable performance...
Great work guys this is a sweet collab!!!
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ps14
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Date: October 29, 2007 @ 1:11 PM
After a hard day teaching feckless students this song suited my mood perfectly. A triumph.
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tsand20175
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Date: October 31, 2007 @ 6:20 PM
great feel....dark vocals and subject matter. nice track to perform "live". Bass and drums rock.
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joycedavis
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Date: November 2, 2007 @ 9:18 AM
i agree with tsand---i can picture this live, with me so high i enjoy it rockin my head playing airguitar like an idiot in the front standing row at a huge concert where i am a huge groupie.
wow. that came from nowhere here.
i think i'm gonna live!  ---jd
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MonnieB
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Date: November 2, 2007 @ 8:07 PM
Rock at it's best... Dark... Heavy... Thick guitar, EXCELLENT VOCALS... You guys tear this up... I like the lyrics... Very simple but damned potent... Good job, guys!
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Engine11RDenny
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Date: November 3, 2007 @ 8:31 AM
Great reaction time to a heavy track. The first take is always the best - most heart felt and honest moment in a songs life this track has a real live in studio feal like real punk hardcore with gripping licks  needs the black light and strobe for max effect. I hear a mix of stars in your vox Steve early Bowie, Pistols, Flipper and Pylon your all modern goth dudes! but mostly the whole track has a David Essex Rock On vibe more of a grinder and a classic song guys  Nice Collab
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FraDonaghy
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Date: November 3, 2007 @ 9:19 PM
I hear some INXS in here, maybe you have a bit of Michael Hutchence in you Steve.. just make sure you loosen your tie.
Great stuff here, the music is kick ass and the singing / effects really go hand in hand with the in your face guitar.
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 ShadowMom
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Date: November 3, 2007 @ 11:35 PM
Holy shit, Steven! That sounds so creepy!  for sure, I love the vocal effects, and there's just nothing else to say about Frank, except when he's being bad he's very very bad.... and so are you!  
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 songbird
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Date: November 10, 2007 @ 6:56 PM
Oh yeah...this is friggin wicked Love it!! Great job guys
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Saxsinger
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Date: November 12, 2007 @ 6:28 PM
Cool collab!
Great job guys!
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Saint
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Date: November 14, 2007 @ 9:33 PM
Haha, awesome lyrics  You are two of the most twisted fucks I know The simple but catchy guitar phrase works really well here. The delay on the vox is really cool too on this. 
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zedsalt
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Date: December 21, 2007 @ 8:07 PM
This punky, dry, direct instrumentation / dramatically warped vocal sandwich is MIGHTY tasty! It's pretty cool how the lyric is decidedly, purposefully UNpoetic (not that there isn't a very "writerly" line or three in there), while the instrumentation IS quite artsy...in a butch, brusque, almost accidentally crafty way. Not only am I enjoying this, I'm enjoying it in a way that's leaving me a bit at a loss for words...a nifty trick in and of itself.
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