 ShadowMom
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Date: August 7, 2007 @ 11:13 PM
  Just merely excellent, Steven!
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 shutyatrap
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Date: August 8, 2007 @ 5:01 AM
Feeling like feeling
Its cold outside my window.
Holds a curtain to the outside world I fear, I fear
My Bed is make of nails and it hurts when I turn over to my belly as I dream of running naked... running naked.
Twice I felt love just this morning. Just before the sun was dawning. Once for you and once for me its nice feeling alive sometimes.
All my friends are made up. Some i even dream up in my sleep. Some are normal some are freaks(Hey Sham..lol)
You, you make me happy. Know that you like me makes me glad but when i wake up and your gone I feel sad.. I feel sad.
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 Rodrica
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Date: August 8, 2007 @ 10:33 AM
This has a strange yet captivating psychedelic feel to it - very nice job!! Great lyrics! There's an originality of style that only you could come up with - one of my favorite tracks of yours  
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independentm...
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Date: August 8, 2007 @ 8:41 PM
Good.
...yes, VERY good.
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 GTOriginal
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Date: August 9, 2007 @ 6:19 PM
I really like your "older" stuff. It is so cool, this is a gem far as songwriting goes.   
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evansorchid
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Date: August 11, 2007 @ 10:11 AM
Definitely a spellbinding track. I really like how you've put this together. The bubbling effect on the guitar makes it sound like you're stirring a cauldron as you sing. The songwriting is simply superb. The melody and chord changes flow nicely into each other. This one's a keeper!
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SimonWaldram
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Date: August 14, 2007 @ 7:36 AM
There's such a delicate beauty to this one, especially in that lovely chorus, which is one of my favourites of yours. The line "its nice feeling alive sometimes" somehow manages to convey hope and hopelessness at the same time. You are a beautiful soul, Mr Davies.
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Bluenevus
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Date: August 15, 2007 @ 7:18 PM
Kewl..!
I'm at a loss for words...
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hantu
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Date: August 19, 2007 @ 3:51 AM
 running naked -thanks for that visual steVEN...!  1:15 this is nice and bright, lovely? yes, the melody you sing, yes. Oh was that 115 the chorus? i think so, i don't fuckin know, but i think so. Ooops, i thought it was a slight break and was waiting for you to carry on singing away, but you didn't, it is infact the end of the song lol. Ok, now that i'm done with the comment filler, i'll get on with things lol. I'm going to sleep soon and i'm sure i'll dream of you running naked with your balls winging all over the gaf (ouch! my brain just puked in itself), but thankfully i at least have a normal soft bed. But hey seriously, i like you, but i guess that would be expected as i'm your best imaginary friend :motherfuckinkingoftheimaginariesinstevenshead:   "It's nice feeling alive sometimes", it is. I like these lyrics, fascinating but not too out there that they go completely beyond me  I get the feeling this was done in a simple kind of campfire manner, in the sense that you just didn't fuck around and you just did it, you felt it and just did it -YEH! If i'm wrong don't correct me, i might cry or shit my pants (which is usually a bad thing). Starting the track off with "It's cold outside my window" gave me an instant visual which worked well with story of this song. GT said "I really like your "older" stuff." oh? is this an older piece? Did you re-do it? i don't think you did, maybe you should? again, don't correct me if i'm wrong.  It's a nice song, best part = Lyrics!
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farfor44
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Date: August 27, 2007 @ 7:02 AM
I'm loving the bubbly sound in the background.not sure how ya did that,but its cool..cool lyrics
great vocals!!
nicely done
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